Evermore: The Immortals

Published in 2009, Evermore is the first of a six-novel young adult series called Immortals by author Alyson Noel. The series follows the relationship between a teenager imbued with psychic powers and a 600-year-old immortal who pursues her across time. Readers and critics complain that Evermore relies entirely on clichés common to other young adult fantasy novels, features a relationship not based on consent or power balance at its center, and promotes potentially offensive stereotypes.

The protagonist is 16-year-old Ever Bloom. As the novel opens, Ever is whining about her sweatshirt as she is riding in the car with her parents and younger sister Riley. Distracted, her father hits a deer and the entire family is killed, although Ever is mysteriously brought back to life in the hospital.

Riddled with guilt and grief, Ever moves in with her aunt Sabine to a sprawling beach house in California. Although Sabine is a high-powered lawyer who is frequently at work, and although the house has an annex that is basically a completely outfitted apartment for Ever’s personal use, Ever complains that her aunt is burdensomely restricting her freedom in unspecified ways.



Also restricting Ever’s freedom are her newfound psychic powers. Ever since she was revived after the car accident, Ever has had a growing variety of mental abilities. She can see colorful auras around people that indicate their moods, she has telepathy and can read thoughts, she has visions of the future, she can learn personal details about people by touching them, she can absorb all related information from touching a piece of writing, and she can see ghosts everywhere she goes. Although the novel suggests that Ever is deeply disturbed by her powers, this isn’t borne out in her actions. Some powers seem helpful: she cheats on tests by psychically getting test answers from the written tests questions, absorbs books through her touch, and reads the thoughts of those around her in order to feel superior to them. Other, seemingly distressing powers don’t come up much: after Ever explains that she sees the spirits of the dead everywhere she goes and that they are always trying to interact with her, this potentially deeply disturbing detail never comes up again.

Although she was popular at her old school, at her new school Ever decides to abandon hygiene and personal appearance and become of the “outcasts”: Haven, a goth girl whom Ever finds both slutty and immature, and Miles, a gay stereotype so offensive that every review of the novel mentions him with distaste.

Soon, Damen Auguste enrolls at Bay View High School. He is gorgeous, rich, perfectly flawless, and very mysterious. Immediately drawn to Ever, Damen connects with her at English class. Although she repeatedly rejects his advances and makes it very clear that she is not interested in getting involved with him, Damen doesn’t take no for an answer. Instead, he woos Ever by obsessively stalking her and telling her that every other girl at their school is a slut, until she gives in to his aggressive pursuit. Reviewers are distressed by this portrayal of attraction, which seems to reinforce the idea that women are prey and that “no” means “keep trying.”



Meanwhile, Ever tells us that she still interacts with the ghost of her dead sister Riley. However, after meeting Ava, a much less powerful psychic, Ever realizes that her love is keeping Riley attached to the material plain rather than letting her go to a resting place. With Ava’s help, Ever releases Riley’s ghost.

Whenever she is with Damen, he is able to suppress Ever’s intrusive psychic abilities. He doesn’t have an aura and can build a shield around her mind. Wondering what he is hiding, Ever breaks into his house to investigate and learns that Damen has original Shakespeare drafts, paintings from Picasso and van Gogh, and other such evidence that he is over 600 years old.

Ever figures out that it was Damen who pulled her back into the world of the living after her car accident, and assumes that his powers and abilities mean that he is a vampire. But Damen confesses that this isn’t the case – he is an immortal, a being that has lived for centuries after drinking an elixir of everlasting life. Damen tells Ever that she has been reincarnated many times, and that he has spent his whole life trying to find each version of her because he is in love with her.



The problem is Audrina, Damen’s wife. Audrina is madly in love with Damen, although he grew tired of her several centuries ago, and she is jealous of his desire to be with Ever instead – so jealous that she has murdered each of the incarnations of Ever that he has come across. When Drina shows up in the present, Ever kills her during a fight in their kitchen. Ever is eager to drink the immortality elixir, but Damen says that she has to be sure that this is what she wants before he will make it for her. The novel ends with them setting out to adventure together.